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 ##### Copyright (c) 2014, Alaska Housing Finance Corporation. All Rights Reserved.
 
-BMON is a web-based software application that stores and analyzes sensor data coming from buildings or other facilities. The application was developed by the Alaska Housing Finance Corporation (AHFC) to find ways to reduce the energy use and improve the maintenance of some of their buildings. The application presents a simple user interface for viewing data, but includes informative charts such as Histograms and Hourly Profile charts for analyzing the data.  Alerts can be set up to text or email individuals if sensor values move outside normal ranges.
+BMON is a web-based software application that stores and analyzes sensor data coming from buildings or other facilities. The application was developed by the Alaska Housing Finance Corporation (AHFC) to find ways to reduce the energy use and improve the maintenance of their buildings. The application presents a simple user interface for viewing data, but includes informative charts such as Histograms and Hourly Profile charts for analyzing the data.  Alerts can be set up to text or email individuals if sensor values move outside normal ranges.
 
 Here is a link to the [[AHFC BMON Web Site|https://bms.ahfc.us/]].  Here is a screenshot of the application being used to look at the electricicty usage of the AHFC Headquarters building (the green bands indicate the building's occupied periods):
 
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 Please note that this project uses the [[Highcharts and Highstock|http://www.highcharts.com/]] charting libraries, which are *not* open source.  Please see the [[Licensing Page|http://shop.highsoft.com/highcharts.html]] and the [[Licensing FAQ|http://shop.highsoft.com/faq#licensing-faq]] for these products to ensure that you comply with the licensing requirements.
 
-This Wiki holds the documentation for the software.  The documentation is divided into three main sections, described below and available on the sidebar menu to the right of this screen.
+This Wiki holds the documentation for the software.  The documentation is divided into three main sections, described below and available on the sidebar menu on the righthand side of this screen.
 
 ## [[Users|User Introduction]]
 
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 ## [[Developers|Developer Introduction]]
 
-This section provides documentation for developers who need or want to modify the code of the BMON system.  The source of the project is internally documented with comments, but the documentation in this Wiki explains the overall structure of the application.  The GitHub repository holding the source code is [[located here|https://github.com/alanmitchell/bmon/]].
+This section provides documentation for developers who want to modify the code of the BMON system.  The source code of the project is internally documented with comments, but the documentation in this Wiki explains the overall structure of the application.  The GitHub repository holding the source code is [[located here|https://github.com/alanmitchell/bmon/]].
 
 ## [[Contact Info]]
 
-Contact information for the main BMON developer is available here.
+Contact information for key BMON personnel and developers is available here.