SysAdmin/System-Administrator-Introduction.md

-This System Administrator documentation explains how to install and configure the system for your particular buildings and sensors.  These activities should be the task of one or two system administrators who more expertise with the system than the Users who are interested in viewing and analyzing the data held by BMON.
+This System Administrator documentation explains how to install and configure the system for your particular buildings and sensors.  These activities should be the task of one or two system administrators who have more expertise with BMON than the general Users who are just interested in viewing and analyzing the data.
 
-The separate topics addressed are summarized below, and the associated documents are available through the sidebar on the right or by clicking on the section headings below.
+The separate system administrator topics are summarized below, and the associated documents are available through the sidebar on the right or by clicking on the section headings below.
 
 ### [[BMON Installation|How to Install BMON on a Web Server]]
 
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ You can have BMON send you a text message or email if important sensor condition
 
 ### [[Creating a Dashboard]]
 
-A "Dashboard" can be created for any of the buildings in the BMON system.  Here is an example:
+A summary "Dashboard" can be created for any of the buildings in the BMON system.  Here is an example:
 
 [[images/sample_dashboard.png]]
 
@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ This document describes how the Dashboards are created.
 
 ### [[Transform Functions]]
 
-Some sensors do not send data in format you would like to display.  Or, some sensors have small errors that need correction.  "Transform" function allow you to convert units or transform values before storage and display in BMON.
+Some sensors do not send data in a format that you would like to display.  Or, some sensors have small errors that need correction.  "Transform" functions allow you to convert units or transform values before storage and display in BMON.
 
 ### [[Calculated Fields]]